No Red Hot Pie For Me

No Red Hot Pie For Me

    | Apr 20, 2017
VanillaMick69   Man 47yrs
Hi guys and girls I'm just your average clean tidy honest bloke looking for fun times but like many others can't manage some nice warm yummy pie,and help with my profile would be appreciated

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I_touch_myself2   Woman 53yrs

Hi

Don't worry, I won't lather you, I've had lots of coffee 😉 first, brave move asking this question 😉

I'll start with my likes. I like that your profile is honest, friendly, I believe it and that's a huge plus for me. I like the way you look, you look earthy and sexual, you have a European look about you which I find appealing. You say you live by yourself, huge tick from me and great that you mention that. Love your notes about kink etc., all great.

Not many negatives for me. Are you aware though that guests can't see most of your pictures? I can only see 2, one close up butt shot lol and your face, very nice btw 😉 but I can't get an overall sense of what you look like. So some more pictures that aren't restricted would be great. Otherwise, not much wrong, maybe a little confusing with the word vanilla in your user name, and kink in your description? But overall nothing wrong aside from lack of vision which is easily corrected. Hope it improves for you 😃
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Sherlock_H   Man 33yrs

Also a newbie, but got similar help, happy to pass on.


Hey Mick, it's a solid start to a profile, so I only have a couple of thoughts that might help.

Your photos are pretty decent. They communicate that you're a confident/shameless larrikin. I'd consider mixing them up a little bit, throw in some fishing, or cooking, or something that shows what you like to do, over and above what you look like.

The parts where you get to write in your own input are where I'd get to work. From my perspective, they come across as a machine gun of rapid fire descriptives, with only the commas for breathing. I'd recommend taking a little time to make it more prosaic, and less bullet pointish. Nobody is expecting Hemingway (some might be, but you can't please everyone lol), but if you connect all your points into a few sentences that flow nicely, someone reading your profile will be at the bottom of the list before they know it.

Good luck mate!

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Cruisinglife

Op

Nothing wrong with your profile if your happy with it. Maybe alter your Profile name if your Bi in a MMF. That definitely isn't Vanilla 😂.


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Fit_Geek   Man 43yrs

Lose the dick pic

Any lady that wants to see it, can ask for your private album. Most don't want it straight up.

Run your profile through Word or another word processor, there's a good percentage who'll look at the grammar and immediately rule you out. Five minutes doing this will be worth it. The numbers here are at least 10 (and probably closer to 20) single males to single females, don't knock yourself out of the running at the first hurdle. A significant percentage will as it currently is structured.

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AnnieWhichway   TV/CD 54yrs

Nice to see

The newer peeps helping out with tips. Great job guys, all in the swing. You guys would work well together in a gangbang......
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Missb4u   Woman 44yrs

Visual appeal

And I'm not taking just pics.

Either use structured sentences or dot points.

I don't care so much about grammar or spelling but I do have a thing about profiles looking appealing with spacing and general layout.

Personally I'm a fan of dot points.

Most women seem to like a written profile though using structured sentences and correct grammar.



Your pics are great.
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WittySex   Couple Man 38yrs Woman 24yrs

Well...

The, commas,and,the, spacing, just,has, to, be,fixed, in,your, profile,,,
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Kay1987   Woman 29yrs

Grammar

And the first photo being of your arse? Rather see your face.
Also stating that your horny and wanting fun is mostly unnecessary in my opinion as honestly, a large portion of us are in here for that reason ( in varying degrees obviously ) and reading it just makes your profile seem tacky and lacking substance.
Good luck

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I_touch_myself2   Woman 53yrs

okay

47? Forgive me but are you seriously expecting anyone to believe that?

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